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Window to the Soul

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"What could someone like you possibly have to offer me?"
"...I will give you my soul."
"And in exchange...?"
"Let me stay with you."


Alternatively Titled: Welcome to Hell
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Well, I've finally finished it! I'm not quite sure what gave me this idea, but I've been having a bunch of MSN adventures with :iconkaisuki: and she has me stuck on this pairing alskfjdska ;^; CURSE YOU, KAI-CHAN, AND YOUR SEXY CHARACTERS!!


...Regardless, I'm not allowed to give out much information about this character. c: All I can tell you is that he is for Kai-chan's Vocalouji manga and he is DEAD SEXY MMN.

MSN Adventures (aka Cupcake Raid):
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Media: iScribble.net private board
Time: About 13 hours, minus sleeping time and goofing off/forgetting to finish

Belial/Lucifer (c) *KaiSuki
Art + Raiyna (c) Me, =Raiyna
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Time for my first critique o3o

First of all, for an iScribble picture this is amazing. It shows that even with a limited toolset you can creat amazing things.

Now for criticism~

1) That shading is very well done. I love they way you used multiple colour shading. The only thing I can tell about that is that you might have used a slightly more brown
for the darkest shade of her hair, instead of the more red orange... The rest of her hair has more brown in it than red. It's not distracting, merely a suggestion.

2) Leaving out the second eye enhances the creepyness of the picture and puts the focal point more on the eyes. Good choice (b'')b

3)It's a sad thing you can't move layers on iScribble. It could have been moved a little more to the middle. Or you could have cut off part of your background, which brings me to the last part

4) iScribble is crazy. Not accepting your drawing because of the background? Pfft. A picture like this deserves a soft background.
And this background fits the "hell/demon/devil" theme very well.

5)I don't know how to say this, but the sparks on his eye look a bit wierd to me. =/ But I love the chant/spell/curse thingy on her eye. o3o

Overal it's a very nice picture, which says enough on its own.
She looks like a statue, a doll, played by the red-haired puppeteer. He's in charge. And he's enjoying it.

You said to me your working on a creepy picture.
And I can tell you transmitted that feeling perfectly.